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    Okay, folks... give it your best shot!

    Who's first?
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    That's my story, and I'm sticking to it.

  • #2
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    a lonely figure at the computer
    posting gibberish.
    oh, problem is loose nut at end of keyboard!

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    • #3
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      Um, apparently a reminder is in order ( ) -- Haiku is a 17-syllable verse form, three lines, consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables.
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      That's my story, and I'm sticking to it.

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      • #4
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        I cannot count dat high.

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        • #5
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          Kimo's one sounded like a Rap Reiplinger take-off. Ho, that guy had some good ones.

          Unsuspecting dog
          Little does he know
          Manong in da shadows.

          A lonely figure in a nonexistent line
          I wait for hours.
          Oh... banks closed on Saturday!

          Ten-foot waves wash da shore.
          Undertow and shifting sands.
          HEEELLP!!

          Rap Reiplinger, Poi Dog, 1978

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          • #6
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            we only steal from da best.

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            • #7
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              Voters never learn
              Same party keeps on winning
              Problems keep growing
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              Energy answers are already here.

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              • #8
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                God's sense of humor
                Coatless monkeys with no hunch
                Look in a mirror


                Life is either an adventure... or you're not doing it right!!!

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                • #9
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                  You stay kolohe
                  What a rascal I've been told
                  Think she might be right


                  Life is either an adventure... or you're not doing it right!!!

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                  • #10
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                    Life is just Da Kine
                    We must make the best of it
                    Come here my lovely
                    Life is either an adventure... or you're not doing it right!!!

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                    • #11
                      Re: Haiku

                      My favorite:

                      Two butta-fry
                      One fry on toppa da odda
                      What the *pffffft* they doing?

                      --Andy Bumatai
                      Make trouble, have fun, do good stuffs.

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                      • #12
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                        it's noisy in here
                        kimo made dinner tonight
                        damn those pork and beans
                        Last edited by MadAzza; April 14, 2006, 02:46 AM. Reason: senses

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                        • #13
                          Re: Haiku

                          Had some fun today
                          Playing Pukashell tourguide
                          I made a new friend
                          Life is either an adventure... or you're not doing it right!!!

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                          • #14
                            Re: Haiku

                            Originally posted by kimo55
                            I cannot count dat high.
                            Kimo types away
                            Oblivious to the words
                            That leave his fingers
                            Make trouble, have fun, do good stuffs.

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                            • #15
                              Re: Haiku

                              A Haiku haiku


                              Climb the Haiku stairs
                              For the thrill of a lifetime
                              Take photos for proof
                              Life is either an adventure... or you're not doing it right!!!

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